Friday, March 11, 2016

Learning Through Dialogue and Thoughts

            In Baldwin’s “This Morning, This Evening, So Soon” there is a lot that happens, something that is not surprising in a very long short story. Although there are a number of characters that are key to the story as a whole, I found that one of the most interesting characters was Boona, and despite his appearance in only the last scene, we are told a lot about his story. All of the information we get is in a short span of writing, but the way that it is organized gives us a lot more information than you would expect.
             For context, while the narrator and his friends are at a nightclub, they meet Boona, who has been friends with the narrator for many years, despite them having lost touch for a while. The conflict arrises when Boona is accused of stealing money from Ada. This conflict is what tells us the most about Boona, and Baldwin gives us information through the thoughts of the narrator, rather than through dialogue. I found this section very interesting to read especially since we know what the narrator wanted to say to Boona, and what he really said. This is seen on page 189 which is when the narrator is at first talking to Boona about stealing the money.
“She say I take her money,” he says. He, too looks as though he is about to weep—but I do not know for which reason. “You know me, you know me almost twelve years, you think I do such a thing?”
Talley saw you, I want to say, but I cannot say it. Perhaps Talley only thought he saw him. Perhaps it is easy to see a boy who looks like Boona with his hand in an American girl’s purse.


           I believe that this is a very important passage, as we see how the narrator is having an internal struggle trying not to get his friend in trouble. I believe that this way of giving the reader information, with a mix of thought and dialogue, ends up supplying us with much more. From the passage with Boona as a whole we learn about why he steals through the narrator’s thoughts, but also about the prejudice of the surrounding community from the conversation. All in all the dynamic of the dynamics of the writing in this last passage is quite complicated, but I believe that in the end we are supplied with better  information about Boona and his situation.

2 comments:

  1. It's clear that the narrator is slightly suspicious of Boona immediately hearing the claims from Ada and the others that they saw him steal the money, because he knows of so many other times when Boona has stolen. Even if it was just for survival and basic necessities, the fact of the matter is that Boona has stolen in the past and would steal from almost anyone. Despite this suspicion, as you say, the narrator is conflicted because he knows that if he inquires about it to Boona or searches him, he will end up appearing along the likes of Vidal with respect to his prejudice.

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  2. I think this scene is very important to the story. You could take it that he gives Boona the benefit of the doubt because he has been in similar situations in America. In the end, it does not matter whether or not Boona stole the money, becuase the narrator still has the experience which reminds him of the racial prejudice everywhere.

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